Thesis Statement of Portraying Mind

While the portrayal of schizophrenia in the character of David Helfgott in the movie "Shine" by Scott Hicks is inspiring and ends happily, based on several scholarly sources, I will argue the real prognosis and treatment of schizophrenia is often far less encouraging.
(I feel like I'm coping the whole thesis from professor, just changed the name of the movie, but I have no idea how to paraphrase it in my own words yet...........I'll figure it out later...)

Second Thought about Research Paper

I've decided the movie that I'm going to write about---"Shine." I believe there are not many people choose this one, and that is going to make my paper a little bit unique. The story in the movie is actually based on a true story. I'm very surprised about this. So far, I've watched a couple of clipes on Youtube, some of the plots are very touching.